When I write a description for a paysite, the first page I hit is the join page. If I am lucky I can write most of the description right from the join page. Unfortunately, most of the time I end up spending more time than I want going through the site’s tour.

Why do I hit the join page when I want to write a description? Simple. A good join page summarizes the key features of the site, thus making it easy to write a description. A good join page should contain the following two elements;

  • Summarization Of Site Features - Don’t list every feature, but highlight what your site contains.
  • Assure The Surfer That It’s Safe - Many surfers do not trust using their credit card online. Make sure they know that it is ok.

Let’s look at a good join form. Here is one from Pride Mov. It has all the elements of a good join form. It is obvious to the surfer that their credit card is safe. 100% discreet, 100% secure, 24/7 support. It doesn’t get any better than that. From the join page a surfer can assume the following about the site; daily updates, 100% gay dvd movies (no filler content), full length dvds, download and own (no DRM), no pay per view (ends confusion with the VOD model), 511 dvds. What more does a surfer need to know?

Why is information like this important on a join form if you have it all on your tour? Simple. We can only make one assumption about any surfer that is on your join page, and that assumption is he is on our join page. We have no idea how he got there or what he saw on his way. Never assume he went through your whole tour and read every feature of your site. Most don’t actually. The join page is you one last shot at getting him to pull out his card and hit the submit button. It’s also the page that may determine if I will take the time to write a description of a site and market it.